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Pokemon: The Final Chapter

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Wiggin

I think Wiggin had a luxray, not gunther.

 

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frank46433

yeah! i liked it! thanks for putting me in there lol i got excited reading my name and lampet lol

 

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yeah! i liked it! thanks for putting me in there lol i got excited reading my name and lampet lol

 

 

also if im ever in it again, changed my pidove to blazekin instead lol

 

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shadowwarriors

oh sorry! I forgot *faceaplm*

 

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123321isEpicnes

Sorry if this sounds mean, i'm bolding the typos, just to let you know.

 

 

 

 

Cool. You'll be in my next chapter

 

 

 

Chapter 2

 

A Hero Rises

 

 

 

The next day, in a small little hous in kanto, a ten year old Ash Ketchum awakes from a deep sleep. "Wow" he said "That was some dream huh pikachu?" Ash little electric mouse friend jumped up with a "Pika pika pikachu!" Ash laughed and hugged him.

 

"Oh no!" he yelled "I'm late for my first day of school!" Ash picked up Pikachu took a bite out of a roll and a spoon full of cerial and ran out the door. Ash is taking a break from going on journeys to go to school and train some in his home town. After all he didn't know where to go! He'd defeated all the regions he knew of. Ash was running really fast. He went to the school's pokemon day care center and droped off pikachu. He could see a Blissy, belonging to Brock, a Piplup, the belonged to Dawn, an Umbreon, belonging to Gary, a Haxorus, that belonged to Iris, and an Electavire, that belonged to Paul. They were each aloud to bring one pokemon to play with at recess. And right on time, right behind him a trainer in white clothing, with green hair ran up.

 

"Sorry i'm late!" said the boy "Oh no! Where is Zoroark!" nearby a Tree was snickering "Knock it off buddy!" the tree shrunk down to the trainer's size and walked in the day care.

 

"So," said Ash to the boy "Your late to N?"

 

"Yeah," N said "Brutal dream, it was about a pokemon being destroyed!"

 

"Huh" said Ash "I had one just like that,"

 

"Weird," responded N. They walked to school together. When they got there they sat down. N sat next to Iris and Ash sat down next to one of his friends Gunther, he looked back and remembered a pokemon burrowing in the ground and he guessed it was his Excadrill playing around. Ash had battled Gunther alot and lost alot because Excadrill is immune to Pikachu's attacks. Ash wanted to challenge him again today. They always had huge battles at recess were everyone would use a pokemon and the last one standing would win. Finally the bell rang and they all ran out side.

 

 

 

They all stood in a circle. Then they all threw out their pokeballs. Suddenly there were nine pokemon facing off. Dawn started off "Now Piplup! Use Hydro Pump!" Dawn's Piplup shot a heavy stream of water a Excadrill. When it hit suddenly Excadrill shifted then suddenly it turned into Zoroark.

 

"Ha" said N "Carma, you attack someone who'd be easy to knock out and now your in the dog house, Zoroark! Use Focus Blast!" Zoroak created a ball of energy and flung it at Empoleon. Empoleon went flying backwards and and hit a nearby tree. Meanwhile, Wiggen, one of Gary Oak's friends, and his Luxray, Paul and his Electavire, and Iris and her Haxorus, were facing off.

 

"Come on!" yelled Iris "Use Outrage Haxorus!" Haxorus began stomping around. He knocked Luxray back quite alot but when it was running toward Electavire, Paul made his move.

 

"Now!" said Paul "Protect and follow up with Thunder Punch!" Electavire blocked outrage which confused Haxorus and follwed up with a punch charge by a jolt of electric power. Then Wiggen recovered from the hard hit.

 

"Luxray, use Wild Charge!" and before Haxorus could regain his footing, Luxray ran at him with a hige amount of power. It Haxoruswho fell and fainted. Iris was the first out.

 

 

 

Next in anothe rpart of the battle, Excadrill and Umbreon were battleing. "All mine," said Gunther in asmug sort of way. "Now Excadrill! Use drill run!" Excadrill drove into Umbreon in it's drill form, but Umbreon was well trained and didn't budge.

 

"Now Umbreon! Use Take Down!" Yelled Gary. In responce Umbreon ran and tackled Excarill. Excardill threw Eevee off and stood up.

 

"Let's try our new move!" yelled Gunther "Use Fissue Excadrill!" Excadrill slamed his claw on the cround so hard it opened up a crak in the ground. Umbreon fell in and instantly fainted and went back in it's pokeball. Gary fell to the ground defeated, while Gunther moved on to go try and ambush Empoleon. Finally we move over to Ash and Brock. Brock's Blissey was taking heavy damage from two back to back Electro Balls.

 

"Want some more?" mocked Ash

 

"Ha!" said Brock "Blissey use Double Edge" Blissey ran at Pikachu

 

"Pikachu!" he said "One more Electro Ball!" The Electro ball and Blissey. There was alot of smoke and when it cleared Blissey had fainted. Then before Ash could attack someone else, There was a loud yell and suddenly a giant dragon pokemon fell from the sky.

 

"Oh no!" yelled Wiggen "That's Giratina!" Giratina roared and launched five black balls at the kids.

 

"Ah!" yelled Gunther "It's using shadow ball!"

 

"Wow!" said N "A legendary! I caught Reshiram I can catch him!" but before he good try, Giratina was absorbed by a purple light. It was absorbed into a master ball. Then the ball was pikced up and suddenly everyone gasped

 

"Have no fear, Cyrus has saved you!" he threw the ball in his hand and laughed

 

"Who's this creep" said Wiggen

 

"That's Cyrus!" said Dawn "The leader of Team Galactic!"

 

"Release that pokemon!" yelled Ash

 

"Why?" he responed "I caught it fair and square!" he cackled ran off.

 

"Gunther! Gary!" yelled Ash "Come with me, we need to catch Cyrus I don't like the looks of this. You gusy stay behing in case grunts come!" and Ash, Gunther, and Gary ran after Cyrus. Was this a mistake? Will Cyrus use Giratina's powers for evil? Find out next chapter.

 

 

 

 

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shadowwarriors

no thanks a bunch. I want this story to be good. Thanks bro

 

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CodyOwl

Name: Cody

 

Pokemon: Sceptile, Venusuar, and Uxie.

 

Why no legandary Pokemon? Is Ash going to catch Zekrom?

 

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CodyOwl

Put me in. Please.

 

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shadowwarriors

sure

 

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Richie51399

Me too! Does Rotom count as a legend?

 

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CamelGuru

I like the ideas for the story. As for Giratina showing up randomly I can't argue with since in every Pokemon movie the legendary Pokemon it stars does just that. :P

 

I don't care about typos that much, as long as it's readable.

 

 

 

 

 

Heres my character: Azuma

 

Pokemon: Just an Azumarill that is kept out of its Pokeball.

 

You don't have to put my character in right away, just whenever you feel is the best time to do so. Trust me, I can wait!

 

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CodyOwl

Will you put me in the story?

 

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ChaosOrphen

he'll put you in okay,

 

just stop posting a thousand times its spamming

 

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PokelegendX

I'd like to be in the story also.

 

 

 

Name: Draco

 

Pokemon: Typhlosion, Eelektrik, Infernape, and Tepig, please!

 

 

 

Like Azumabunny said, I can wait!

 

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shadowwarriors

 

I'd like to be in the story also.

 

 

 

Name: Draco

 

Pokemon: Typhlosion, Eelektrik, Infernape, and Tepig, please!

 

 

 

Like Azumabunny said, I can wait!

 

 

hey brudah, I can't wait for your fan fic (i only read ludwigs cuz his is the only one right now (besides mine) and I hope yours'll come out soon.

 

Everyone will be in the story. Everyone who has been in the story (besides Gunther) will be in at a way later time. Richie you were already in sheilding the chillens with Ferrothorn.

 

Typos will be destroyed by word don't worry

 

People who just signed up, since ash and co. have left you may have to wait a long time before you come in kay?

 

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Richie51399

No prob. But does Rotom count as a legend?

 

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HenryWong122

Can I join?

 

Name:Henry Wong.

 

Pokemon: Swampert, Azelf, and Rapidash.

 

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HenryWong122

Ok.

 

 

 

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shadowwarriors

hey guys my life is real complicated at the moment so chapter may go up rather slowly. I apolgize but this book will finish do not worry. And keep requesting chracters!

 

(to those who know me well, i may not be seen for a while and may have to drop out of PokePlot)

 

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ChaosOrphen

gasp!!

 

out of pokeplot?

 

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shadowwarriors

unfortunatly yes. And maybe the TR fan club. TC will be temporarily disbanded.

 

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ChaosOrphen

sob sob sob

 

i'll miss you shadow<img src="http://www.pokemontcg.com/javascripts/fckeditor/editor/images/smiley/png/sad_smile.png" alt="" />

 

even though i joined about 2 weeks ago

 

 

 

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frank46433

hehe don't worry. as long as you'll be back. you can't leave forever. your gonna be in my pokemon comic you knowdevil_smile.png

 

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shadowwarriors

 

hehe don't worry. as long as you'll be back. you can't leave forever. your gonna be in my pokemon comic you knowdevil_smile.png

 

 

OH noez!

 

Okay. Leave a comment here when its up and i'll see it when I come on

 

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frank46433

ha don't worry it will still be a long while before its up. you'll be back by then

 

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