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(hey Im starting a fan fic! Enjoy! Comment if ye like. And post constructive critism. Also leave a comment if you want to be and extra trainer. Leave your trainer name and what pokemon (non-legend) you would have)

 

 

 

Pokemon The Final Chapter

 

Chapter 1: Dark Forces

 

 

 

It was a dark and quite night in the Kanto Reigion. You'd be mad to think anything bad would happen. For once in over two thousand years all pokemon were at harmony. Pidove were flying with Pidgeys. A Skitty and a Glameow were playing in the grass. As I said you would be mad to think that somthing bad would happen. But those who were mad, were right. A Man in a cloak walked briskley toward a cave. He was walking through the tall grass when a starly playfuly jumped out ready to battle. The man stared at the pokemon obviously annoyed. He threw out a single pokeball and out came a terrifying dragon pokemon with three heads! The Starly tried to look brave but the man yelled his command and suddenly, the Starly was no longer there. Dead. The man returned his pokemon to his pokeball and kept on walking. When he reached the cave he said "There is no I team but an I in devistaion." the cave suddenly revealed a secret door. The man walked inside and the door disappeared.

 

 

 

When he got in he sat down at a table. Also at the table were many other peculiar figures. At the head was a man in a slick looking suit. He stood up and started to speak.

 

"Ah, welcome Ghetsis," he said "Let me introduce you to some of my new friends who will be helping us." he pointed to a rather relaxed looking fellow,

 

"This is Maxie, the once great leader of Team Magma, and this," he said pointing to a buff looking male with a blue bandanna, "Is Archie, the leader of Team Aqua, and last but not least," he turned to a rather emotionless induvidual "This is Cyrus, the leader of Team Galactic."

 

"Hmm" said Ghetsis rather cooly "I don't suppose you could tell me who you are?"

 

"Oh," said the man "You'll find out soon enough." he smirked and sat back in his chair.

 

"Well," said Ghetsis "I hope you don't mind but I brought some friends," just like that three shadows droped down and imobelized the man "This" said Ghetsis "Is the shadow triad, better known as the Striaton City Gym Trio, Cilan, Cress, and Chilli." The man laughed as if this was some kind of joke.

 

"Well played," he said and he threw off the trio sending them flying into a wall. "I am Giovanni," he said "and if you know whats good for you, you'll never ambush me again." Ghetsis bowed and took a seat next to Maxie. Then Cyrus stood up and spoke. "There will two more joining us, Evice, the leader of Team Chipher, and Hunter J, a skilled hunter thought to be dead. We can play this to our advantage. Use it as an element of Suprise."

 

"Good" said Giovanni "Now to my plan. My two top Team Rocket members, Jessie and James and their Persian, have gathered news that Arceus is growing weak. He says he will produce an heir. Someone to watch over the world in his absence. Now here's were we come in. After Acreus produces his heir no doubt he'll do everything in his power to protect it. Even though he's growing weak he has more time. And in that time he'll destroy us if we lay a finger on his heir. That is why we must gather enough power to destroy Arceus."

 

"Where can we get the much power?" said Maxie eagerly

 

"Where do you think?" said Cyrus sarcastically "Legends,"

 

"Correct!" said Giovanni "Each of our little team here will need to obtain a legend for this to work. And here is some help!" he pulled out ten purple pokeballs.

 

"Are those!" said Cyrus

 

"Indeed, master balls." finished Giovanni "Each of you get one. You must catch a legend and report here."

 

"One problem" said Ghetsis

 

"What?" Archie said

 

"The boy, Ash Ketchum and his friends" he responded

 

"Oh yes," said Giovanni "We must keep and eye on them, but for now, meeting dismissed.

 

They all walked out and grabed their master balls and went to find a legend.

 

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ChaosOrphen

Excellent story, I enjoyed how you ajoined the villains together

 

you should bring it to the team rocket fan club

 

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shadowwarriors

i may post a link but not now

 

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jgdl223

its clever how uv set it up, good startthumbs_up.png

 

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shadowwarriors

thanks you guys

 

If you wanna be in my story

 

just fill out this

 

Name: ( trainer name)

 

Pokemon: (one or top three non legend)

 

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elitetrainer468

man, that story is good, especially the ending with the masterballs

 

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shadowwarriors

 

man, that story is good, especially the ending with the masterballs

 

 

thanks yeah. It's will be kind of sad in a bit.

 

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jgdl223

sad i what way?

 

i have to go now, bye guys.....

 

i enjoyed ur stoty

 

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shadowwarriors

 

sad i what way?

 

i have to go now, bye guys.....

 

i enjoyed ur stoty

 

 

I can't tell ye

 

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Prince_Ludwig

*irritated how you spelled Arceus wrong in three different ways in the same paragraph*

 

 

 

 

 

I've no comment as to the story's actual quality.

 

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shadowwarriors

 

*irritated how you spelled Arceus wrong in three different ways in the same paragraph*

 

 

 

 

 

I've no comment as to the story's actual quality.

 

 

okay then. Cut me slack pokemon names are weird and everyone spells them differently

 

edit pluys alot of people say (ar-c-us) and i don't really know how to say it. I'd like it if you wold me any other things that were un-enjoyable about it

 

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Wiggin

Wow. Thats pretty good<img src="http://www.pokemontcg.com/javascripts/fckeditor/editor/images/smiley/png/omg_smile.png" alt="" />

 

Could I be in it?

 

Name: Wiggin

 

Pokemon: Luxray, Feraligater, Gliscor.

 

 

 

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ChaosOrphen

I would like to be a part of the story

 

Name: Gunther

 

Pokemon: Charizard, Machamp, Excadrill

 

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shadowwarriors

Cool. You'll be in my next chapter

 

 

 

Chapter 2

 

A Hero Rises

 

 

 

The next day, in a small little hous in kanto, a ten year old Ash Ketchum awakes from a deep sleep. "Wow," he said "That was some dream huh Pikachu?" Ashes little electric mouse friend jumped up with a "Pika Pika Pikachu!" Ash laughed and hugged him.

 

"Oh no!" he yelled "I'm late for my first day of school!" Ash picked up Pikachu took a bite out of a roll and a spoon full of cerial and ran out the door. Ash is taking a break from going on journeys to go to school and train some in his home town. After all he didn't know where to go! He'd defeated all the regions he knew of. Ash was running really fast. He went to the school's pokemon day care center and droped off pikachu. He could see a Blissy, belonging to Brock, a Piplup, the belonged to Dawn, an Umbreon, belonging to Gary, a Haxorus, that belonged to Iris, and an Electavire, that belonged to Paul. They were each aloud to bring one pokemon to play with at recess. And right on time, right behind him a trainer in white clothing, with green hair ran up.

 

"Sorry i'm late!" said the boy "Oh no! Where is Zoroark!" nearby a Tree was snickering "Knock it off buddy!" the tree shrunk down to the trainer's size and walked in the day care.

 

"So," said Ash to the boy "Your late to N?"

 

"Yeah," N said "Brutal dream, it was about a pokemon being destroyed!"

 

"Huh" said Ash "I had one just like that,"

 

"Weird," responded N. They walked to school together. When they got there they sat down. N sat next to Iris and Ash sat down next to one of his friends Gunther, he looked back and remembered a pokemon burrowing in the ground and he guessed it was his Excadrill playing around. Ash had battled Gunther alot and lost alot because Excadrill is immune to Pikachu's attacks. Ash wanted to challenge him again today. They always had huge battles at recess were everyone would use a pokemon and the last one standing would win. Finally the bell rang and they all ran out side.

 

 

 

They all stood in a circle. Then they all threw out their pokeballs. Suddenly there were nine pokemon facing off. Dawn started off "Now Piplup! Use Hydro Pump!" Dawn's Piplup shot a heavy stream of water a Excadrill. When it hit suddenly Excadrill shifted then suddenly it turned into Zoroark.

 

"Ha" said N "Carma, you attack someone who'd be easy to knock out and now your in the dog house, Zoroark! Use Focus Blast!" Zoroak created a ball of energy and flung it at Empoleon. Empoleon went flying backwards and and hit a nearby tree. Meanwhile, Wiggen, one of Gary Oak's friends, and his Luxray, Paul and his Electavire, and Iris and her Haxorus, were facing off.

 

"Come on!" yelled Iris "Use Outrage Haxorus!" Haxorus began stomping around. He knocked Luxray back quite alot but when it was running toward Electavire, Paul made his move.

 

"Now!" said Paul "Protect and follow up with Thunder Punch!" Electavire blocked outrage which confused Haxorus and follwed up with a punch charge by a jolt of electric power. Then Wiggen recovered from the hard hit.

 

"Luxray, use Wild Charge!" and before Haxorus could regain his footing, Luxray ran at him with a hige amount of power. It Haxoruswho fell and fainted. Iris was the first out.

 

 

 

Next in anothe rpart of the battle, Excadrill and Umbreon were battleing. "All mine," said Gunther in asmug sort of way. "Now Excadrill! Use drill run!" Excadrill drove into Umbreon in it's drill form, but Umbreon was well trained and didn't budge.

 

"Now Umbreon! Use Take Down!" Yelled Gary. In responce Umbreon ran and tackled Excarill. Excardill threw Eevee off and stood up.

 

"Let's try our new move!" yelled Gunther "Use Fissue Excadrill!" Excadrill slamed his claw on the cround so hard it opened up a crak in the ground. Umbreon fell in and instantly fainted and went back in it's pokeball. Gary fell to the ground defeated, while Gunther moved on to go try and ambush Empoleon. Finally we move over to Ash and Brock. Brock's Blissey was taking heavy damage from two back to back Electro Balls.

 

"Want some more?" mocked Ash

 

"Ha!" said Brock "Blissey use Double Edge" Blissey ran at Pikachu

 

"Pikachu!" he said "One more Electro Ball!" The Electro ball and Blissey. There was alot of smoke and when it cleared Blissey had fainted. Then before Ash could attack someone else, There was a loud yell and suddenly a giant dragon pokemon fell from the sky.

 

"Oh no!" yelled Wiggen "That's Giratina!" Giratina roared and launched five black balls at the kids.

 

"Ah!" yelled Gunther "It's using shadow ball!"

 

"Wow!" said N "A legendary! I caught Reshiram I can catch him!" but before he good try, Giratina was absorbed by a purple light. It was absorbed into a master ball. Then the ball was pikced up and suddenly everyone gasped

 

"Have no fear, Cyrus has saved you!" he threw the ball in his hand and laughed

 

"Who's this creep" said Wiggen

 

"That's Cyrus!" said Dawn "The leader of Team Galactic!"

 

"Release that pokemon!" yelled Ash

 

"Why?" he responed "I caught it fair and square!" he cackled ran off.

 

"Gunther! Gary!" yelled Ash "Come with me, we need to catch Cyrus I don't like the looks of this. You gusy stay behing in case grunts come!" and Ash, Gunther, and Gary ran after Cyrus. Was this a mistake? Will Cyrus use Giratina's powers for evil? Find out next chapter.

 

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ChaosOrphen

thats a great story, nice school idea '

 

and thanks for making me a beast<img src="http://www.pokemontcg.com/javascripts/fckeditor/editor/images/smiley/png/regular_smile.png" alt="" />

 

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shadowwarriors

 

thats a great story, nice school idea '

 

and thanks for making me a beastregular_smile.png

 

 

your welcome!

 

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Prince_Ludwig
and an Electabuzz, that belonged to Paul.

 

 

 

 

 

...

 

 

 

"Come on!" yelled Iris "Use Outrage Haxorus!" Haxorus began stomping around. He knocked Luxray back quite alot but when it was running toward Electavire, Paul made his move.

 

"Now!" said Paul "Protect and follow up with Thunder Punch!" Electavire blocked outrage which confused Haxorus and follwed up with a punch charge by a jolt of electric power. Then Wiggen recovered from the hard hit.

 

So Electabuzz inexplicably evolved, causing a plothole?

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, uh, my suspension of disbelief was broken when Giratina randomly flew in.

 

 

 

<strike>Grammar and spellin' wouldn't hurt either.</strike>

 

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ChaosOrphen

 

and an Electabuzz, that belonged to Paul.

 

 

 

 

 

...

 

"Come on!" yelled Iris "Use Outrage Haxorus!" Haxorus began stomping around. He knocked Luxray back quite alot but when it was running toward Electavire, Paul made his move.

 

"Now!" said Paul "Protect and follow up with Thunder Punch!" Electavire blocked outrage which confused Haxorus and follwed up with a punch charge by a jolt of electric power. Then Wiggen recovered from the hard hit.

 

So Electabuzz inexplicably evolved, causing a plothole?

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, uh, my suspension of disbelief was broken when Giratina randomly flew in.

 

 

 

<strike>Grammar and spellin' wouldn't hurt either.</strike>

 

 

well, i believe this is a continuation of the original story, so electabuzz evolving isn't a plot hole

 

<sup><img src="http://www.deviantart.com/download/154899887/Animated_Charizard_by_El_Sato.gif" alt="" /></sup>

 

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Prince_Ludwig

 

 

and an Electabuzz, that belonged to Paul.

 

 

 

 

 

...

 

"Come on!" yelled Iris "Use Outrage Haxorus!" Haxorus began stomping around. He knocked Luxray back quite alot but when it was running toward Electavire, Paul made his move.

 

"Now!" said Paul "Protect and follow up with Thunder Punch!" Electavire blocked outrage which confused Haxorus and follwed up with a punch charge by a jolt of electric power. Then Wiggen recovered from the hard hit.

 

So Electabuzz inexplicably evolved, causing a plothole?

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, uh, my suspension of disbelief was broken when Giratina randomly flew in.

 

 

 

<strike>Grammar and spellin' wouldn't hurt either.</strike>

 

 

well, i believe this is a continuation of the original story, so electabuzz evolving isn't a plot hole<sup>

 

</sup>

 

Um, of course it is. He has an Electabuzz before the battle, and an Electivire during the battle. How is that not a plothole?

 

 

 

If it were a continuation of the anime, then it'd be an Electivire to begin with and Gary's Eevee would be an Umbreon.

 

 

 

Edit: And Piplup would most likely stay a Piplup instead of evolving to Empoleon. So I'm going to assume it's not a continuation so I don't have to fault him for not staying true to the source material.

 

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ChaosOrphen

Well, i suspected you would say that, i still enjoyed the reading material

 

<sup><img src="http://www.deviantart.com/download/154899887/Animated_Charizard_by_El_Sato.gif" alt="" /></sup>

 

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Richie51399

Richie

 

Samurott, Hydreigon, Ferrothorn

 

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shadowwarriors

Sorry I goy mixed up wit Electabuzz and Electavire. Secondly, Wow that's alot I don't know. I'll edit accordingly

 

Edit: what were you in disbelief about? Yeah i have alot of typos sryz!

 

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frank46433

cool!! Fankie: piplup, lampet and pidove

 

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shadowwarriors

Chapter 3

 

The Awesome Power Of The Sky Warrior

 

Ash, Gunther, and Gary were running. The wind stung their eyes. They knew it would be hard to defeat Cyrus with only one pokemon and even harder now that he had Giratina. They follwed Cyrus to an abandoned store house. Ash and his friends crept inside and saw Cyrus was on some sort of video chat with someone all to fimiliar to Ash.

 

"That Giovanni!" he said to Gunther, who didn't know about all the crime Ash had battled over the years. They were hiding behind boxes of pokeballs and potions. Then Gary realized somthing unsettling.

 

"Guys," he said "Who is the only one in a radius of a hundred miles that can even try to make master balls?" he said in a quivering voice. Ash realized it too.

 

"Professer Oak!" he said "Your dad! He could be in danger! We need to go back."

 

"No," said Gary "We need to just stay here. They probly stole his data and copied it. It's fine just, sorry i brought it up." they shrugged their shoulders and spied.

 

"It is done" said Cyrus in the camera "I have caught the legendary Ghost and Dragon Type Giratina."

 

"Good." said Giovanni "Get back to HQ now."

 

"Yeah, one problem" said Cyrus "The kids, Ash, and his friends saw me capture it. They ran after me but I shook them."

 

"Good, " said Giovanni "but we need to be more carful. Just come back now!"

 

"Okay," said Cyrus "I need to do," he turned off the chat and turned around. He then released Giratina. "Your lucky i didn't turn you in," he said "Aura Sphere!" Giratina shot Aura Sphere straight at Ash and his friends they narrowly dodged and jumped out. They threw their pokemon on to the battlground as well. That's when Gunther spoke up.

 

"No," he said "You guys need to go back and check on Professer Oak. I'll hold him off."

 

"You can't!" said Ash, but Gunther ran up and used his Excadrill. Cyrus laughed.

 

"Giratina! Aura Sphere!" Giratina shot Aura Sphere striaght at Gunther, but Luxray jumped in front. The Giratina shot another Aura Sphere.It Gunther square in the stomach. He flew back and hit a wall. Ash was sure no one could survive that.

 

"Gunther!" he yelled "No!" Giratina turned to them and they started running downhill. They kept running until the got to the school. But so did Giratina. Giratina shot Aura Sphere all over the school. He was running, trying to get everyone out f the school. Frankie, a kid in the class lower than Ash, and brother of Gunther, was trying to fight Giratina off with a Lampet.

 

"Get out of here!" yelled Ash, and when Frankie saw Giratina, he did just that. One of his teachers Ricardo, everyone called him Richie, was defending them by using his Ferrothorn's protect as a sheild. Giratina broke through and was using Aura Sphere and Shadow Claw to destroy any thing that stood in it's way. Then all of the sudden, a thousand shots of light came down. Giratina dodged them but was then hit by a storng pulse which was Hyper Beam. They all looked up and saw Arceus, fly down. At the sight of Arceus, Giratina used Shadow Force and dissapeared. Everyone was cheering, but Ash and Gary were running. They ran and ran until they reached Oak Lab. When they got in the place was ransacked.

 

"But how?" said Ash "Wouldn't you have realized this this morning?"

 

"No," he said coldly "I didn't come here yesterday or this morning." They walked forward and into Professer Oak's office. They saw this too, was largly destroyed. Then they saw Professer Oak tied up in the corner.

 

"Professer Oak!" said Ash as he started to untie the knots.

 

"You can't let them!" said Oak "All of us pokemon professer's know Arceus is weak, and will produce an heir to his power. Teams, Rocket, Plasma, Magma, Aqua, and Galactic have all decided to catch legendary pokemon and **** Arceus so they can catch the heir. This is, as you know, one of the first legendaries to hatch from and egg since Palkia, Dialga, and Giratina. They say it will be mor powerfull then usuall. It will be the most powerful pokemon in the world! If they catch it, things will go bad! Luckily legendaries are very hard to find,"

 

"Cyrus already found and caught Giratina." said Ash "He destroyed the school with it and took the life of my friend, Gunther." Oak's expression went dark.

 

"Giratina alone may be enough power to hold off Arceus and catch Arceuswak."

 

"What?" said Ash "What's an Arceuswak?"

 

"Oh, it's not a perminate name, it just means Young Arceus. That's what we professer's call it" Oak got up to his feet. "To defeat them," he said "You need to catch legendary pokemon as well." he gave Ash ten masterballs. "These are our last ones," he said :"Go and catch legends!" they walked out and sighed.

 

"What so we do now?" said Gary, as he kicked a rock.

 

"We go and get Gunther, he can't die there." the want back to the store house and picked up Gunther's body and took it to his house. His mother sobbed at the sight. They went back to school and explained what happen.

 

"I will be gone for a long time." he said "Months, i need you guys to stay out of trouble."

 

"I'm coming with you," said Iris

 

"Me too" said Gary

 

"I'll stand behind and protect the others." said N, which was smart because he had his Reshiram and could easily tak down any legend that came along. He ran home to go get it, as the rest talked. Paul, Dawn, Brock, and Gary all wanted to go.

 

"Okay!" he said "Together! We can defeat Giovanni!" Ash and Co. are on yet another journey to save Kanto and the world!

 

To be contiued

 

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ChaosOrphen

Wow! thats pretty awesome, i like the next installment

 

but i don't remember saying anything about a luxray (not the i don't want one)

 

 

 

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