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hope you guys enjoy, there r still some mistakes and stuff i havent added in yet but this is the fondation of the story iv wrote so far. also thanks for the support iv been getting its been great. those of you that haven read the first 2 chapters you can read it and then read the new and lot bigger chapter 3. hope you enjoy and please write ur oppinions about it below.

 

 

<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><i style="mso-bidi-font-style:

normal">The untold story of the mysterious green figure<o:p></o:p></i></b>

 

<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><i style="mso-bidi-font-style:

normal">Intro: <o:p></o:p></i></b>

 

<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><i style="mso-bidi-font-style:

normal">Many Pokémon fans know that Ash otherwise known as Red has been very popular in the Pokémon series famously known for his electrical insanely cool Pikachu that he got from professor Oak and his red hot blazing Charazard that has stood up and even beet some legendary Pokémon such as Articuno. He is known very well through the cartoon and has even appeared in the games. This is similar to Gary otherwise known as Blue who is also well known for his astonishingly cool </i></b><i style="mso-bidi-font-style:normal">B<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal">lastoys that he got originally got from professor Oak as a Squartle. This just leaves one thing untold who or where in the cartoon series was green. I know he was in Japanese comics and stuff but no one has seen him in an English cartoon or an English book. This is why I am writing this book and would love ideas along the way. I have decided to call the mysterious green character Reece.<o:p></o:p></b></i>

 

<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><i style="mso-bidi-font-style:

normal">A special thanks to the people in the TCG online called Silverleafe2, and Richieman99 Who helped give me some good material to base my story of Reece on and get me started.<o:p></o:p></i></b>

 

<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><i style="mso-bidi-font-style:

normal">Chapter 1- The beginning of an unsecure future <o:p></o:p></i></b>

 

<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal">Reece is a wana be trainer and is 10 years old. His dream like many others is to become a world known Pokémon trainer that is unbelievably strong. Reece woke up early that morning, there was a tremendous thunder storm that night and Reece didn’t get much sleep at all, so he decided to go to professor Oaks lab early and collect is promised Pokémon. When arriving there he decided to choose the grass type Bulbasour (to match his green joggers and hoody). Professor oak also gave him 5 Pokeballs and a Pokedex. He said he was expecting 3 other children and Reece was the first. He said he was expecting a boy named Ash and another boy named Gary, his grandson. But he couldn’t remember the other person’s name. Reece left his home town called Pallet town that he had spent 10 long years at to explore the big wide world, heading north towards Viridian city. Reece headed of running as fast as his feet could take him, feeling the wind hit against his face as if a Pidgy was using gust against him. Then suddenly Reece tripped over something that was a pinkie purple colour. It was a Rattatat! Reece quickly pulled out his Pokeball that contained Bulbasour from his waist and chucked at the Rattatat. For a split second Reece had had a mind blank and had got so caught up in the moment he had forgotten what moves Bulbasour had learnt. The Rattatat came charging towards Bulbasour and inches away before Rattatat had the chance to use tackle Reece said Solarbeam! Bulbasour looked round at Reece in a confused manor not having a clue what his owner was talking about and turned back to Rattatat where he found himself being smashed to the ground by the Rattatat tackle which was a critical hit. The Rattatat ran off leaving Reece paralyzed with shock and fear into what he has let himself into as he looked at his injured Bulbasour.<o:p></o:p>

 

<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:

normal"><i style="mso-bidi-font-style:normal">Chapter 2- A new beginning<o:p></o:p></i></b>

 

<p class="MsoNormal">Reece suddenly snapped his eyes open and had seen the reality of what has just happened, he then began to wonder if he was really cut out to be a Pokémon trainer. He picked up his Bulbasour and ran north down route 1 towards viridian city. He ran straight into the Pokémon centre and asked the nurse joy to heal his Pokémon. She said she would but it would take a bit of time so took the Pokémon and asked Reece to sit in the waiting room. He sat down next to a boy who wore a red cap and joggers. Reece bent down and looked at the floor and sighed. The mysterious trainer looked down at Reece and said “hard day huh”. Reece looked round and startled “you don’t know the meaning of hard”. The mysterious guy said “the names ash, what’s yours and what’s bothering you?” Reece suddenly turned round and remembered professor oak saying that there were some other trainers coming to get their first Pokémon today and that one was called ash. Reece startled with amazement and asked “what one did you choose”. Ash confused with what Reece had said lifted one eyebrow up and spluttered out “what?” .Reece then realised how ridiculously he sounded and then explained he had got his first Pokémon today and when he raced off down route 1 and got in a fight with a Rattatat he forgot Bulbasours moves. Ash then told Reece about how when he chose Pikachu it wouldn’t obey him and recently saved him from a flock of birds. Ash and Reece then realised they were both in the same situation as each other and decided to battle to one another to remember how fun it really can be. “Are you ready ash to get beaten by the best trainer in kanto” yelled Reece”. Ash just ignored him and just looked at his Pikachu and hoped for the best. Suddenly nurse joy stormed out from the Pokémon centre furious with anger yelling as loud as a Loudred “you can’t have a Pokémon battle without a ref”. Reece and Ash both looked at each other as if there head teacher had just yelled in their faces. If you are that keen on battling each other right here and now I will supervise the match. Let’s travel down to route 2 where there is more space. To there surprise there was an old man blocking the way and a lady sitting next to him saying “come on grandpa your blocking the road”, But the grandfather wouldn’t budge. He just sat there mumbling to himself about a pot of tea. Ash ran towards him and just before he was about to jump the old man had reflexes like a Hitmochan and swooped both of ashes legs up of the ground and ash landed with a thud. “No one is going to pass this road until I have my cup of tea” the old man exclaimed much clearer this time. Nurse joy suddenly vanished and went back to the Pokémon centre to make some tea. Ash and Reece started to talk to each other about their past life. Ash tells Reece he was an only child and had never seen his father. Reece replayed back by stating his father travels a lot and at this exact point in time he has no idea where he is. But he then said he has a sister called Hannah who is very annoying and was one of the reasons he wanted to become a Pokémon trainer, to leave home. They both laughed and then realised nurse joy was coming back with some hot tea. The old man drank it, complained it was too hot and walked off with his niece. The path was clear and nothing was in there way, Ash and Reece then new what time it was. It was going to be there first proper battle.<o:p></o:p>

 

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thanks Charimaster, the next chapter is about his first gym badge and believe me it fits in with the cartoon series this time, and belive me it not 1 to miss. i will put the opening up later today...................... depending on the response i get.

 

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>__< Emeralds not green, although it could appear green in the "emerald forest" what do you think veridian meens?

 

well now you know any way the only dif. between emerald and other pichus) is it has the same mark as a thunderstone on its chest

 

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i love the story by the way and i realy need to make a thread for the Story of Emerald and

 

The Legend of Growlex

 

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hope you guys enjoy, there r still some mistakes and stuff i havent added in yet but this is the fondation of the story iv wrote so far. also thanks for the support iv been getting its been great. those of you that haven read the first 2 chapters you can read it and then read the new and lot bigger chapter 3. hope you enjoy and please write ur oppinions about it below.

 

 

 

<p class="MsoNormal"><b style=""><i style="">The untold story of the mysterious green figure<o:p></o:p></i></b>

 

<p class="MsoNormal"><b style=""><i style="">Intro: <o:p></o:p></i></b>

 

<p class="MsoNormal"><b style=""><i style="">Many Pokémon fans know that Ash otherwise known as Red has been very popular in the Pokémon series famously known for his electrical insanely cool Pikachu that he got from professor Oak and his red hot blazing Charazard that has stood up and even beet some legendary Pokémon such as Articuno. He is known very well through the cartoon and has even appeared in the games. This is similar to Gary otherwise known as Blue who is also well known for his astonishingly cool </i></b><i style="">B<b style="">lastoys that he got originally got from professor Oak as a Squartle. This just leaves one thing untold ****** where in the cartoon series was green. I know he was in Japanese comics and stuff but no one has seen him in an English cartoon or an English book. This is why I am writing this book and would love ideas along the way. I have decided to call the mysterious green character Reece.<o:p></o:p></b></i>

 

<p class="MsoNormal"><b style=""><i style="">A special thanks to the people in the TCG online called Silverleafe2, and Richieman99 Who helped give me some good material to base my story of Reece on and get me started.<o:p></o:p></i></b>

 

<p class="MsoNormal"><b style=""><i style="">Chapter 1- The beginning of an unsecure future <o:p></o:p></i></b>

 

<p style="line-height: normal;" class="MsoNormal">Reece is a wana be trainer and is 10 years old. His dream like many others is to become a world known Pokémon trainer that is unbelievably strong. Reece woke up early that morning, there was a tremendous thunder storm that night and Reece didn’t get much sleep at all, so he decided to go to professor Oaks lab early and collect is promised Pokémon. When arriving there he decided to choose the grass type Bulbasour (to match his green joggers and hoody). Professor oak also gave him 5 Pokeballs and a Pokedex. He said he was expecting 3 other children and Reece was the first. He said he was expecting a boy named Ash and another boy named Gary, his grandson. But he couldn’t remember the other person’s name. Reece left his home town called Pallet town that he had spent 10 long years at to explore the big wide world, heading north towards Viridian city. Reece headed of running as fast as his feet could take him, feeling the wind hit against his face as if a Pidgy was using gust against him. Then suddenly Reece tripped over something that was a pinkie purple colour. It was a Rattatat! Reece quickly pulled out his Pokeball that contained Bulbasour from his waist and chucked at the Rattatat. For a split second Reece had had a mind blank and had got so caught up in the moment he had forgotten what moves Bulbasour had learnt. The Rattatat came charging towards Bulbasour and inches away before Rattatat had the chance to use tackle Reece said Solarbeam! Bulbasour looked round at Reece in a confused manor not having a clue what his owner was talking about and turned back to Rattatat where he found himself being smashed to the ground by the Rattatat tackle which was a critical hit. The Rattatat ran off leaving Reece paralyzed with shock and fear into what he has let himself into as he looked at his injured Bulbasour.<o:p></o:p>

 

<p style="line-height: normal;" class="MsoNormal"><b style=""><i style="">Chapter 2- A new beginning<o:p></o:p></i></b>

 

<p class="MsoNormal">Reece suddenly snapped his eyes open and had seen the reality of what has just happened, he then began to wonder if he was really cut out to be a Pokémon trainer. He picked up his Bulbasour and ran north down route 1 towards viridian city. He ran straight into the Pokémon centre and asked the nurse joy to heal his Pokémon. She said she would but it would take a bit of time so took the Pokémon and asked Reece to sit in the waiting room. He sat down next to a boy who wore a red cap and joggers. Reece bent down and looked at the floor and sighed. The mysterious trainer looked down at Reece and said “hard day huh”. Reece looked round and startled “you don’t know the meaning of hard”. The mysterious guy said “the names ash, what’s yours and what’s bothering you?” Reece suddenly turned round and remembered professor oak saying that there were some other trainers coming to get their first Pokémon today and that one was called ash. Reece startled with amazement and asked “what one did you choose”. Ash confused with what Reece had said lifted one eyebrow up and spluttered out “what?” .Reece then realised how ridiculously he sounded and then explained he had got his first Pokémon today and when he raced off down route 1 and got in a fight with a Rattatat he forgot Bulbasours moves. Ash then told Reece about how when he chose Pikachu it wouldn’t obey him and recently saved him from a flock of birds. Ash and Reece then realised they were both in the same situation as each other and decided to battle to one another to remember how fun it really can be. “Are you ready ash to get beaten by the best trainer in kanto” yelled Reece”. Ash just ignored him and just looked at his Pikachu and hoped for the best. Suddenly nurse joy stormed out from the Pokémon centre furious with anger yelling as loud as a Loudred “you can’t have a Pokémon battle without a ref”. Reece and Ash both looked at each other as if there head teacher had just yelled in their faces. If you are that keen on battling each other right here and now I will supervise the match. Let’s travel down to route 2 where there is more space. To there surprise there was an old man blocking the way and a lady sitting next to him saying “come on grandpa your blocking the road”, But the grandfather wouldn’t budge. He just sat there mumbling to himself about a *** of tea. Ash ran towards him and just before he was about to jump the old man had reflexes like a Hitmochan and swooped both of ashes legs up of the ground and ash landed with a thud. “No one is going to pass this road until I have my cup of tea” the old man exclaimed much clearer this time. Nurse joy suddenly vanished and went back to the Pokémon centre to make some tea. Ash and Reece started to talk to each other about their past life. Ash tells Reece he was an only child and had never seen his father. Reece replayed back by stating his father travels a lot and at this exact point in time he has no idea where he is. But he then said he has a sister called Hannah who is very annoying and was one of the reasons he wanted to become a Pokémon trainer, to leave home. They both laughed and then realised nurse joy was coming back with some hot tea. The old man drank it, complained it was too hot and walked off with his niece. The path was clear and nothing was in there way, Ash and Reece then new what time it was. It was going to be there first proper battle.<o:p></o:p>

 

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omg thats totaly awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<img src="http://www.pokemontcg.com/javascripts/fckeditor/editor/images/smiley/png/thumbs_up.png" alt="" />

 

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well i tried my bess not to repeat words any way i was gona do ur idea about biil but slightly tweak it but i havent thought how yet and i haven gon into detail over charachters yet as i said befor this is the fondation of the book. there is a lot to bee added

 

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thanks Charimaster, the next chapter is about his first gym badge and believe me it fits in with the cartoon series this time, and belive me it not 1 to miss. i will put the opening up later today...................... depending on the response i get.

 

 

That's gonna be epic

 

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before anyone starts copying anything from this book iv begun. i dont mind compation or any bad comments but i do not want any of my ideas stolen, i know who has givern me certain ideas and i dont mind them using those certain ideas alone, but i have worked hard on this and would not appreatiate it if someone stole it awy from me. also i have asked people i have gathered ideas from to yous them in my work so ihave only usedthe ideas people have said ye to.

 

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its finally upregular_smile.png hope you enjoy beginning of chapter 4

 

 

<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><i style="mso-bidi-font-style:

normal">Chapter 4- The surprising gym leader<o:p></o:p></i></b>

 

<p class="MsoNormal">Reece wakes up next morning to find that he has fallen asleep in Pokecentre waiting room. He stumbles of the three seats he was sprawled across and starts hobbling along to the nurse joy at the front desk. “So your finally awake then” joy said sarcastically “you have been asleep for hours, it must have been a pretty big trip you have just came from”. Reece looked at her thinking whether or not to tell her about the emerald Pikachu he had seen in the Forrest but decided not to as she might think he was a nut job. He just said “yer”, gathered his Pokémon together and walked out the Pokémon centre gathering his thoughts and his bearings and then realised he had made it to the first gym leader city, pewter city. He decided to go straight to the gym and wondered what would lie in store for him…………….<o:p></o:p>

 

<p class="MsoNormal">Reece takes a deep breath and pushes the big iron door leading to the gym. He swings them wide open and to his astonishment there are 6 children on the floor playing and throwing Pokeballs at each other, all ranging from 3 to 13. Suddenly the eldest of the children turns round and stares at Reece for a long while and eventually says to Reece in stubborn way “what do you want?” There is a cold silence in the air. Reece finally bucks up some courage and blurts out, “I challenge this gym leader to a Pokémon match”. There is then another cold silence and then all the children start to ball out laughing. Reece at this moment has turned as red as a strawberry confused in why they were laughing at him.<o:p></o:p>

 

 

 

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the second oldest is Forest who takes over the gym while brock is gone, just fyi

 

oh and i love this chapter so far

 

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oh yer this comment is very importantwhatchutalkingabout_smile.png. Is yellow the character ash or is red the charachter ash . this was a big thing in my last thread and i need to get to the bottom of it.

 

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the second oldest is Forest who takes over the gym while brock is gone, just fyi

 

oh and i love this chapter so far

 

 

that is so useful, thank u, cos that who green faces but i couldent remeber his name from the cartoon series. theres also i twist aswell when he faces forest. also another question , how old is forest?

 

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the second oldest is Forest who takes over the gym while brock is gone, just fyi

 

oh and i love this chapter so far

 

 

that is so useful, thank u, cos that who green faces but i couldent remeber his name from the cartoon series. theres also i twist aswell when he faces forest. also another question , how old is forest?

 

 

11 or 12 i think and at that point the only pokemon he had is a ryhorn

 

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oh yer this comment is very importantwhatchutalkingabout_smile.png. Is yellow the character ash or is red the charachter ash . this was a big thing in my last thread and i need to get to the bottom of it.

 

 

in the manga red was ash and yellow was a girl who posed as a boy but later started dateing red

 

heres a link that tells more about yellow

 

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thanks for the age, and i already new that forest has a ryhorn, but thats not who else his facing................, woops said to much

 

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