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The adventure of Jay Oak


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This is a story in development, spellings still need to be fixed and animations will be added to,

 

here is a small taster on what to expect, please let me know what you think and thank you if you bother to read<img src="http://www.pokemontcg.com/javascripts/fckeditor/editor/images/smiley/png/regular_smile.png" alt="" />

 

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story has been taken down, i am changing and editing it...

 

 

 

 

 

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Excellent! That was amazing! Keep going, you're great! I know this'll be an awesome series!!!

 

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im glad you liked it, im gona be off for a bit now but will log back on later, i hope i get the same response from otheres like urs,lol

 

spread the word, thanks

 

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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: 'Trebuchet MS', Trebuchet, sans-serif; font-size: 20px; -webkit-tap-highlight-color: rgba(26, 26, 26, 0.296875); -webkit-composition-fill-color: rgba(175, 192, 227, 0.230469); -webkit-composition-frame-color: rgba(77, 128, 180, 0.230469); -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; ">Hey I read the beginning of your book. A couple of things, first great start. It's still somewhat choppy but some editing will cure that. Second, perhaps all that info you gave us I the beginning will fit best in a prologue this way people will know what's going on without haviing the huge authors note.

 

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thanks for your coment spiral, a may need ur help in the future for that editing post i was advertising for...

 

if your still want it??

 

 

 

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  • 4 weeks later...

renew thread poof..........................................................................................

 

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Great start Jay, ill get to work on those illustrations this week. sorry ive been so busy.

 

 

yer i posted this like ages ago and then somebody decided to renew the thred lol..

 

i still havet changed the begining of it yet frank so ill start now

 

also i am taking the story down

 

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